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04-12-2008, 06:36 PM
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Originally Posted by FF de Mars View Post
Here's my two tips :

(1) you need a better melody
(2) you need better lyrics
(3) you need to pronounce tricolore (trick-oh-l'or), not tricoleure
(4) don't listen to the haters

I don't want to be negative, but to encourage you to come up with something better. There is room for more chants, and practice makes everything better. Gzood luck.
ad take off the merveilleux.

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