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04-12-2008, 06:36 PM
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Originally Posted by FF de Mars View Post
Here's my two tips :

(1) you need a better melody
(2) you need better lyrics
(3) you need to pronounce tricolore (trick-oh-l'or), not tricoleure
(4) don't listen to the haters

I don't want to be negative, but to encourage you to come up with something better. There is room for more chants, and practice makes everything better. Gzood luck.
+1
ad take off the merveilleux.

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