I consider this my masterpiece so far, please let me know what you think
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02-10-2011, 02:19 PM
Join Date: Mar 2008
Overall I think you did a good job.
If you are looking for some constructive criticism though I have a few suggestions that you could look into.
I think that it might be more of a pump up kind of video if you switched the volumes of the background music with the play by play. That way you hear more of that pump up tune, but can still hear the energetic goal calls etc in the background.
Also, I think if you add the last 20 seconds or so, where it says to bring the cup home to the beginning of the video it would add more. I felt like it was kind of just thrown in there at the end, but if it was at the beginning it would give the video more purpose if that makes sense. Then add like a tag line at the end that says something like "bringing the cup home, one game at a time" or something like that.
Good work, enjoyed it!
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