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12-03-2011, 10:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Grigo25 View Post
you know you could have just said "i saw smith in store" and ended it right there
Great critique. Short, concise, although somewhat on grammar and punctuation. Just enough snark to inspire a critical response. Solid suggestions for improvement, B+ overall.

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