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12-03-2011, 02:48 PM
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Originally Posted by The OttoMan View Post
Great critique. Short, concise, although somewhat on grammar and punctuation. Just enough snark to inspire a critical response. Solid suggestions for improvement, B+ overall.
Excellent analysis. Swiftly delivered, yet subtle enough he may not realize your covert mockery. "Blu-Ray" avatar seals it, though I miss "Pink Freud." However, punctuation is placed far too appropriately. Deserves an A+, but I must deduct marks for grammatical correctness.

Overall: A-

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