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10-22-2012, 07:09 PM
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Originally Posted by Goat Boy View Post
Love the design! Great work, Jerkstore!


One piece of advice: proof-read! The "story behind the name" photo that you uploaded has two s's in "FIRSST". I'd strongly suggest getting someone with strong wordsmithing skills to go over that sort of thing. It gets the idea across, but it could flow a little better. I'm not trying to criticize; it's just a suggestion that I think could help you market your design better!

I would agree, it's rather awkwardly written to say the least. (check pm plz)

Otherwise, you may have converted an unbeliever here. I wasn't thrilled by the name, but the design you've put together is very catching and doesn't look anything like this...


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