Thread: Confirmed with Link: Selanne re-signs with Ducks (1 year, $4.5M)
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11-02-2012, 04:14 PM
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Your sentences shouldn't be wobbling about like an obese drunk on a carousel.

It looks amateurish when you slam adverbs together like that.

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