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01-29-2004, 08:10 PM
Quellet The Dogs Out
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Originally Posted by Teezax
For the most part it's very good. It's a magical story that sort of invites my imagination, and that's great news for me because I've never been to the Wachovia Center. Only complaint or CON if you will is your abundant use of adjectives, not a bad thing but could look overdone in your teacher's eyes.

But good job Bud.
It'll rush me to come sooner than later.
My teacher wanted us to use a lot of adjectives, that was the goal, it was to describe a public place.

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