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02-10-2011, 12:29 AM
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I consider this my masterpiece so far, please let me know what you think

Some of you probably know that I've made some Flyers videos before, mainly single game highlights or player highlights, but I decided to go a different route with this one. Please let me know what you think of it.



Thanks! Go Flyers!

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02-10-2011, 12:34 AM
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****ing groovy


but no superstar? was hoping to see that slapper

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Good stuff man. Solid batch of highlights from this year, easy to read text and #s. Really liked the crowd montage clip shot at the end. If you're gonna edit or change anything, I'd say maybe add a few highlights for the stars of the team (Richie, Giroux etc) since they've had so many memorable plays. Perhaps a montage of big hits from this year? Depends what you ultimately want it to be. Good video.

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Nice job.

If I could throw my 2 cents in, I'd say maybe a few more save highlights. Pretty funny how you got Lavi at the end lol.

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Thanks guys. For this one I just did a 10 second clip of a (in my opinion) remarkable play by each player. It's obvious I couldn't find anything too dazzling for some players I may throw several shorter clips into each 10 second slot instead of having one long one and then just have it fade to a close-up shot of the player, for neatness sake lol.

Thanks for the feedback so far, I appreciate it!

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Turns out my video got some love apparently, it's in an article on crossingbroad today

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Overall I think you did a good job.

If you are looking for some constructive criticism though I have a few suggestions that you could look into.

I think that it might be more of a pump up kind of video if you switched the volumes of the background music with the play by play. That way you hear more of that pump up tune, but can still hear the energetic goal calls etc in the background.

Also, I think if you add the last 20 seconds or so, where it says to bring the cup home to the beginning of the video it would add more. I felt like it was kind of just thrown in there at the end, but if it was at the beginning it would give the video more purpose if that makes sense. Then add like a tag line at the end that says something like "bringing the cup home, one game at a time" or something like that.

Good work, enjoyed it!

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It's missing Jody Shelley...

It's good though, thanks for the work!

Edit: I see your response about Shelley on CB, I guess you could have used his first goal of the year, but it would have sent the wrong message about his game, haha.


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Changed it around a bit, took some of your guys advice. Let me know what you think.


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Thanks man. I'm thinking about putting several goals/plays into a 10 second frame from each player to make it more exciting, but that will have to come later as I'm currently in the middle of doing some video edits for class projects.

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Tweaked it a little


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Ehhhhhh, its whatever.

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Thanks...I guess? You could point out what you didn't like about it instead of just posting some retarded statement.

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Thanks...I guess? You could point out what you didn't like about it instead of just posting some retarded statement.
Don't listen to him.

Very good job though.

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Thanks...I guess? You could point out what you didn't like about it instead of just posting some retarded statement.
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Tweaked it a little
The effect of the transparency is cool, but Youtube compression can't handle it very well. Nice though.

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Yeah, I noticed that too. Do you know of another website I could host it on that could be better?

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its a bunch of random clips pasted together on a time-line with music playing in the background... to deem this as a "masterpiece" is a little over the top. there really isn't any video effects, color corrections, or audio/video "syncing." however, watching flyers clips is always fun.

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its a bunch of random clips pasted together on a time-line with music playing in the background... to deem this as a "masterpiece" is a little over the top. there really isn't any video effects, color corrections, or audio/video "syncing." however, watching flyers clips is always fun.
Yeah, fair enough. I guess "masterpiece" may have been a bit strong, but in my case it kind of is, I guess considering it's the one I spent the most time on. I probably could have spent some more time and refined it a bit, but I was just trying some stuff out with titles and overlays. I'm an amateur at best at this point and I know it's mediocre but that's why I'm working on it.

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