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10-10-2012, 04:48 PM
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Megan Fox with Jame's Earl Jones voice would still be hot...
But James Earl Jones has a voice that could melt butter.

She'd still be hot with say, Gilbert Gottfried's voice.

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guys I need ur opinion on my opening paragraph for a story I have to write. It has to about something that people would not necessarily think it is harmful or scary and make it so. It has to be in a sci-fi setting.

Under a pile of rubble in the old city’s remains laid a strange book that emitted this ghastly green light. No human had been in the old city in over 500 years due to the New New York City built right on top of it. The book had a golden latch with the inscription on the cover, “Readers be warned, an unforgivable evil lies inside and will be revealed when the latch is opened.” The book was the reason why the people of old New York city had to create a new city. The few remaining people who survived were able to create the new city but were sadly unable to find the book and destroy it. When opened a unforeseen terror will wreak havoc upon the civilization it closest to. The story unfolds by a young man stumbling upon something not seen for several centuries.

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This sounds like a terrible movie that would star Jake Gyllenhaal.

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10-10-2012, 04:51 PM
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For a story you have to write for school, it's good. I hate creative writing ********, trust me. At least you have an imagination. It's just very cheesy looking

If it were to be a movie, it'd be the one that bombs in theatres because Jake Gyllenhaal is in it.

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10-10-2012, 04:56 PM
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For a story you have to write for school, it's good. I hate creative writing ********, trust me. At least you have an imagination. It's just very cheesy looking

If it were to be a movie, it'd be the one that bombs in theatres because Jake Gyllenhaal is in it.
oh trust me I do too, I just thought of Pandora's box and spun it off a bit. The guys name is John Pandora lol

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oh trust me I do too, I just thought of Pandora's box and spun it off a bit. The guys name is John Pandora lol
Oh a bit of foreshadowing, I like it. Your movie just upgraded to starring Ben Affleck.

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WHATS IN THE BOX? C'MON MAN, WHATS IN THE BOX?

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Im thinking its gonna be a little creature thing that grows bigger the closer it gets to technology or something like that idkk

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Im thinking its gonna be a little creature thing that grows bigger the closer it gets to technology or something like that idkk
You just took a huge jump and your movie now stars Daniel Glover, Predator 2 version.

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I knew it was a joke I was just saying the anti-joke

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guys I need ur opinion on my opening paragraph for a story I have to write. It has to about something that people would not necessarily think it is harmful or scary and make it so. It has to be in a sci-fi setting.

Under a pile of rubble in the old city’s remains laid a strange book that emitted this ghastly green light. No human had been in the old city in over 500 years due to the New New York City built right on top of it. The book had a golden latch with the inscription on the cover, “Readers be warned, an unforgivable evil lies inside and will be revealed when the latch is opened.” The book was the reason why the people of old New York city had to create a new city. The few remaining people who survived were able to create the new city but were sadly unable to find the book and destroy it. When opened a unforeseen terror will wreak havoc upon the civilization it closest to. The story unfolds by a young man stumbling upon something not seen for several centuries.

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Sounds like Jumanji.

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10-10-2012, 05:09 PM
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I knew it was a joke I was just saying the anti-joke
Hopefully you got my reference?

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10-10-2012, 05:28 PM
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But James Earl Jones has a voice that could melt butter.

She'd still be hot with say, Gilbert Gottfried's voice.
Good point, good point.

Would you do her if she was still Megan Fox, just with one of James Earl Jones legs?

I think i still would.

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10-10-2012, 05:30 PM
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WHATS IN THE BOX? C'MON MAN, WHATS IN THE BOX?

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I made this exact reference like a day ago. The bank lady pulled out a small box to give my son a lollipop and she had a hard time opening it and i said "whats in the booox? come one, what's in the boox!??"

She did not get it either.

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Shame that some don't recognize cinematic greatness.

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Sounds like Jumanji.
I say roll with Jumanji, you can't go wrong.

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Cresty, get your ass to NYC already.

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Avery, you could always go with "Knock" and hope that your teacher doesn't know about it...

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Avery, you could always go with "Knock" and hope that your teacher doesn't know about it...



That's it.
Its the best, shortest scary story of all time.

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Avery, you could always go with "Knock" and hope that your teacher doesn't know about it...



That's it.

I would if I could but I have to submit it to a website because apparently taking others work is a bad thing

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KU won the last thread post count with 80.
80 wouldn't get you into the top 5 on this thread
The 8 of us have been hogging the thread

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KU won the last thread post count with 80.
80 wouldn't get you into the top 5 on this thread
The 8 of us have been hogging the thread
im going hard in this motha****aaa

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Plagiarism Shmagiarism.

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