Your draft is very good, but I'd make a few recommendations:
R1: Nothing, Perry is a SOLID first round pick IMO.
R2: Nothing, Getzlaf will be a PPG player if he remains healthy.
R3: I wouldn't take Doughty in R3 not when there are still PPG forwards available.
R4: Kovy is a solid pick.
R5: Yandle again solid.
R6: Hiller is a bad choice. Cam Ward > Kipper > Halak > Brodeur > Roloson > Hiller
R7: Should have taken Danny Briere.
R8: LW is the deepest position in fantasy hockey. I see no sense in using a pick on Morrow this soon when there are so many steals. Tanguay @ 70 points can be had in R10 or 11. Any one of JVR, T. Hall, Benn, Neal, Gagne, Elias, MacArthur, Landeskog, Mueller would be available down the line also. Just my opinon.
R9: C Stew is ****ing solid in R9.
R10: Broduer is a good pick considering who was still available. Might have taken Roloson instead.
R11: Erik Johnson is okay. I probably would have taken Edler.
The rest is decent.
My best draft this season (picking at 5 out of 12 teams):
R Pos Player
02 C Toews
04 C Thornton
03 L Zetterberg
10 L Tanguay
01 R Perry
06 R,C Briere
07 D Lidstrom
09 D Enstrom
11 D Edler
13 D Seabrook
1. Corey Perry (Anh - RW)
2. Ryan Getzlaf (Anh - C)
3. Drew Doughty (LA - D)
4. Ilya Kovalchuk (NJ - LW,RW)
5. Keith Yandle (Pho - D)
6. Jonas Hiller (Anh - G)
7. Joe Pavelski (SJ - C)
8. Brenden Morrow (Dal - LW)
9. Chris Stewart (StL - RW)
10. Martin Brodeur (NJ - G)
11. Erik Johnson (Col - D)
12. Kevin Shattenkirk (StL - D)
13. Jason Spezza (Ott - C)
14. Semyon Varlamov (Col - G)
15. Matt Moulson (NYI - LW)
16. Teemu Selanne (Anh - RW)
Pavelski over Eriksson, Kessel, Hall, and Gaborik as well as picking Morrow over guys like Sharp, Havlat, Skinner, Lecavalier, Cammalleri, and Stastny are both very poor moves
Overall you had some good late pick in Spezza, Selanne, Shattenkirk etc.. to make up for it so in the end you have a strong club but both Morrow and Pavelski will be hard pressed to hit even 60 mark this season on their respective clubs.
Moulson also is not roster worth in my opinion Fleischmann is undrafted i'd go with him or Weiss at a minimum and i'm sure there is even better than that on the wire